jueves, 12 de mayo de 2016

WRITING. DIALOGUE CORRECTION

ME: PAULA             Hey, Elisa, is it you?
TEACHER:ELISA       Hello, Paula! I haven't seen you for years! How are you?
PAULA                     I'm fine, thank you. You're teaching my brother, aren't you?
ELISA                      Yes, I do. Everytime I talk to him I think of you.
PAULA                     Mmmm... Is it in a good way?
ELISA                       Let's just say that he works slowly like his older sister, but I think you were slower than him.
PAULA                     Oh... Really? Well, actually, I guess I haven't changed at all. At least I don't forget my homework at home anymore.
ELISA                       That's good, and I'm glad you're OK. What are you doing now?
PAULA                     I'm about to finish 2nd Batxillerat and in September I'll start a degree in Animation and Visual Effects. I'm so nervous!
ELISA                       Wow! Isee you have clearly defined ideas. You'll do it very well. I must leave now, goodbye and good luck!
PAULA Bye!